初中英语作文Englishismylife.评析

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English is my life

On my life, English is my best friend. I like English very much.I think it 's a very nice and beautiful language.I can hear ,see,read even feel English every day and everywhere. As for me, I learn for a best life and communication. Every -boby knows English is a language spoken all around the world. I can go abroad , further education or get a good job if I can learn it better.So I will take every chance to practise speaking English whenever possible.Let's enjoy English!

1. 在我的生活中，应用in my life

2. As for me, 表示“至于我”，前面都是讲述“我I”的观点，这里无须再指代“我”了，用在此处欠妥，建议改为what is more, 或 on the other hand.

3. I learn for a best life and communication. 此句表达不清。

4. Every -boby knows English is a language spoken all around the world. 此句是总述，建议放在句首概括更好。

5. nice and beautiful这两个是同义词，重复使用了，建议用useful

英语基础不错，没有时态，主谓一致的语法错误，整体表达明确，主题鲜明。只是要注意一下句首句尾的概括和总结就好。个别句子的表达要流畅，学会运用不同的词汇。