高考英语写作指导（发言稿范文修改）

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高考英语写作指导（发言稿范文修改）

高考英语全国卷中发言稿写作导练
一、文体概述
　　发言稿主要用来交流思想、表达感情、发表看法；也可以用来介绍自己的学习情况和经验等。写发言稿时，要注意三点：1. 观点要鲜明。2. 条理清楚。3. 语言简洁明快。写作分“三步走”：自我介绍并表明发言稿的主题→发言稿的具体内容→进行总结并提出期望。
二、必备短语
1. be qualified for 胜任
2. study efficiently高效地学习
3. get actively involved in class上课积极参与
4. effective learning methods有效的学习方法
5. enjoy a colorful life享受丰富多彩的生活
6. take responsibility to do sth.负责做某事
7. get on/along well with sb.与某人友好相处
8. on behalf of our school代表我们学校
9. develop/form/acquire a good habit of..养成……的好习惯.
10. express one’s warm welcome to sb.向某人表示热烈欢迎
三、套用句式
1. It is my great honor to have a chance to speak here. 能有机会在这里发言是我极大的荣幸。
2. Welcome to the English speech competition/lecture. 欢迎来到这次英语演讲比赛/讲座。
3. It was with sincerity and faithfulness that we created a harmonious atmosphere. 用真诚和忠诚我们创造一个和谐的环境。
4. I am sure that with your great efforts, you will enjoy a colorful life here. 我相信在这你将用努力会享受丰富多彩的生活。
5. I hope what is mentioned above might be helpful to you! 我希望我上面所讲的对你们有帮助！
四、习作修改
(下列范文中共有10处错误，每句最多两处，请改正)
Good afternoon, everyone.
Welcome to our school! High school students are facing with a choice between arts or science. It was not easy choice for me to make. After carefully consideration, though, I decided on science as my main subject of study. The reasons are as follow.
First, science graduates are in great demand than arts ones in China. Second, the science major can helpes me achieve my childhood dream of becoming a scientist. Third, my parents wish me to study science at college because they believe in I will have a brighter future as a science student. Last but not least, my physics teacher is my role model, which influence on me has a lot to do with my decision.
It is for these reasons that I finally made your choice.
Thanks!

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五、课堂练习
假定你是星光中学的高中毕业生李华，母校将为高一新生举办主题为“What to learn in senior high school?”的英语沙龙活动，特邀请你结合自身经历谈谈自己的体会。请根据以下提示准备一份英语发言稿。
1. 学会学习：方法，习惯等；
2. 学会做人：真诚，友善；
3. 学会其他：考生自拟。
注意：1.词数100左右。
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3.开头语和结尾已为你写好。
Good morning, everyone! It is my honor to be here to share with you my opinions on what to learn in senior high school.
Thank you!
六、课外作业
假设你是某大学的学生李华，你校英语俱乐部将选举新一届副主席，负责规划、组织俱乐部的相关活动，你欲参选，请按以下提示，写一篇竞选演讲稿。
1. 个人的优势介绍（如性格、特长等）；
2. 组织校内的活动的设想（如举办讲座、英语晚会等）；
3. 组织校际交流活动的设想（如举办辩论赛、演讲比赛等）；
4. 表达竞选的愿望。
注意：1.词数100左右。
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
3.开头语已为你写好。
参考词汇：副主席vice president    竞选run for
Good afternoon, my dear friends,
My name is Li Hua,      
Thank you!
参考答案与范文：

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习作修改
本演讲稿是关于高中生对文、理科的选择。作者首先表明选择理科，然后阐述了选择理科的理由。
1. facing→faced 因be faced with固定搭配，意为“遇到，面临”。
2. or→and 因between A and B为固定搭配，意为“在A与B之间”。
3. 在easy前加an 因choice是单数可数名词，表示“一个”选择，要用不定冠词。另外，make a choice (作出选择)可看作一个固定短语。
4. carefully→careful 修饰名词，应用形容词。
5. follow→follows 因as follows是习语，不管句子的主语是单数或复数。
6. great→greater 后面的than提示我们此处应用形容词的比较级。
7. helps→help 情态动词后用动词原形。
8. 把believe后的in去掉 因此处的believe表示“相信，认为”，后接宾语从句，不用in，故删除。
9. which→whose 先行词my physics teacher与从句中influence有所属关系，表示“我物理老师（对我的）影响”，用关系代词whose 引导定语从句。
10. your→my 根据主语I可知，此处是我最终做出了“我的”决定。
课堂练习
Good morning, everyone! It is my honor to be here to share with you my opinions on what to learn in senior high school.
In the coming three years, our school life will be challenging. Firstly, we should learn to learn efficiently. Developing a good habit is also of importance. It really benefited me a lot to preview lessons, get actively involved in class, and review what have been taught after class. In addition, we should learn how to get along well with others. In school, I respected teachers and was friendly with classmates. It was with sincerity and faithfulness that we created a harmonious atmosphere. Finally, we should take part in sports and outdoor activities frequently. They were really helpful to build up my body and enrich my school life.
With your great efforts, I am sure that you will enjoy a colorful life here.
Thank you!
                                    
课外作业
Good afternoon, my dear friends,
My name is Li Hua. I'm outgoing and get on well with my classmates and teachers. I am skilled at organizing all kinds of activities. I'd like to run for the vice president of the English club in our school. I know as the vice president, I must do the following things for the club: I will try to make it known to every student and more students involved in the activities organized by the club. What’s more, to improve our English and get more students interested in English, I intend to organize some activities at school like lectures and English parties and inter-school ones such as English debate competitions and speech contests. I hope all of you will vote for me.   
Thank you!