HowI9vechanged!(初三英语作文）

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How I've changed! (初三英语作文）
How I've changed!

My life changed a lot in the last few years.My daily life is different and i used to like different thing when I was a child.For example,I didn't ues to like tests.Now,I don't mind them.I hate gym class.Now it'smy favorite class.I used to play every day after scool.Now,we just study.I used to walk to school.Now,i take the bus.

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