GUIDED WRITING 如何写“我最喜欢的运动”

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GUIDED WRITING 如何写“我最喜欢的运动”
【单元写作呈现】
       What’s your favourite sport? Give reasons why you like it so much. Make notes of your ideas and write a short passage entitled “My favourite sport”.
【写作分析】
    本单元要求写“我最喜欢的运动”，属于记叙文范畴，是中学生最熟悉、最喜欢的话题之一。题目虽然简单，但要把简单的文章写得流畅，也并非容易的事，需要在写作前明确写作的要点，并能恰当地使用连接词。
【审题要素】
1. 明确要求。向别人描述你最喜欢的一项运动，主要是写出你对这项运动的热爱并列举出令人信服的理由，以此说明你喜欢这项运动是正确的。
2. 确定时态。通常情况下，应使用一般现在时，但在介绍你喜欢上这项运动的经历时，用一般过去时。
3. 内容要点：①我喜欢的运动；②喜欢的理由；③最喜欢的运动员；④我怎样提升自己的水平；⑤我的愿望。
【思路引导】
    谋篇布局时应注意以下几个步骤：
    第一部分：开门见山，指出你最喜欢的一项运动是什么，并介绍你参加这项运动的基本情况。
    第二部分：列举你喜欢上这一运动的理由。
    第三部分：谈谈自己最喜欢的运动员，说说希望将来在这项运动上有什么样的发展。
    注意：
    1. 恰当使用连接词，使各个要点之间逻辑连贯、行文通顺。
    2. 最后要检查文章中的语法、拼写等错误。
【语言积累】
There are many kinds of sports that I enjoy, such as ... However, my favourite sport is...
Sports make us healthy, happy, and efficient (效率高的). So I pay special attention to games, especially...
I am interested in many sports, such as ... But I always prefer ... and I enjoy it for many years.
... is a very good sport, and I like it most.
When I was ... I started to...
I play ... three times a week.
... is a very good kind of sport, and that is because ...
... is considered an all-around sport which can exercise all parts of our body.
... is quite a good sport in helping me improve my health.
... is a good sport for our health.
... has given me the most wonderful time in my life. Thus, it is my favourite sport.
I like ... best for many reasons. First...
The reason why ... is that...
I am crazy about ... because...
I have been fond of ... since...
There is no doubt that...
... learn to cooperate (合作) with each other ...
【参考范文】
My favourite sport
       My favourite sport is basketball. I have been fond of it since I was 12 years old. Although I always have a lot of homework to do, I often play basketball with my friends during weekends.
       I became interested in basketball because it is good for my health. It’s well known that basketball requires great strength in the arms and legs as well as great concentration. Playing basketball makes me grow up tall and strong. Second, I have learnt how to cooperate with my team, which, I think, will benefit me.
       I am a fan of Yao Ming, who is a super star in the NBA. I am proud of Yao not only for his amazing height, but also for his perfect skills in basketball. I hope one day I can play basketball as well as Yao.
    通过学习这篇写作指导，你掌握了用英文描写最喜欢的一项运动的写作方法了吗？试着写一下吧，然后与范文加以对照，找出其中的不足并加以改进。