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一只小猪很不讲卫生，平时身上总是脏兮兮、臭哄哄的。（“脏兮兮”、“臭烘烘”写出了小猪不讲卫生，身上的味道。）

一天，小猪看见一群小动物在玩“躲猫猫”，就跑过去说：“加我一个好吗？”小狗捂住鼻子说：“你身上这么脏、这么臭，谁愿意和你玩呀！”小猪一转身又看见一群小动物在玩踢皮球的游戏，连忙跑过去央求说：“加我一个好不好？”“不加，不加，你身上这么脏，会把我们的皮球弄脏的。”小熊说道。（童话故事主要是设计故事情节，故事情节包括起因、经过和结果。这一段是故事的起因，因为脏，小动物们都不愿带小猪玩，故事的起因设计得巧妙有趣，为下文的“洗澡”环节做了铺垫。）

大家都不和小猪玩，小猪只好一个人回家了。在回家的路上，小猪边走边想：小朋友们为啥都不和我玩？难道我真的很脏吗？想着想着，小猪已经回到了家中。（对小猪心理活动的描写十分必要，突出了小猪的憨厚和可爱，有的同学不注意心理描写是不对的。）

“妈妈，妈妈，今天小朋友都不和我玩，都嫌我脏，我真的很脏么？”小猪一见到妈妈就问。猪妈妈说：“你身上太脏了，都臭了，小伙伴当然不愿意和你玩了。”（猪妈妈也说小猪脏、臭，与开头的脏兮兮、臭烘烘相照应。值得表扬的是，这里根据需要作者使用了“太脏了，都臭了”口语化的词语，说明小作者写作是用心的。）“那怎么样才能让我干净些呢？”小猪又问妈妈。猪妈妈说：“你要学会讲卫生，勤洗澡，身上才会干干净净的。现在你就去洗个澡，然后再去找小动物们，看看它们和不和你玩。”（猪妈妈没有吵小猪，而是一步步引导小猪认识讲卫生的重要性，设法帮助他改正坏毛病，养成好习惯。）

怎么写啊！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！！