令人（令我）感动的一件事优秀开头、精彩结尾及习作范文

作文网友 *发表于 2013-11-10 09:33:00* · 发表于 2013-11-10 09:33:00

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作文网友 *发表于 2013-11-10 09:33:37* · 发表于 2013-11-10 09:33:37

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作文网友 *发表于 2013-12-5 20:02:49* · 发表于 2013-12-5 20:02:49

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作文网友 *发表于 2013-12-21 17:57:34* · 发表于 2013-12-21 17:57:34

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作文网友 *发表于 2014-1-4 13:24:34* · 发表于 2014-1-4 13:24:34

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作文网友 *发表于 2014-1-8 19:23:23* · 发表于 2014-1-8 19:23:23

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