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Look! There is a big house in our school. There are five small rooms in it, a language room, an art room, a math room, a game room and a dance room.
In the language room, there are three children. They are learning English with their teacher. In the art room, there are three children, too. They are drawing pictures.
Now, look at the match room. There are three children in it. And they are having math class now. In the dance room, there is a boy and two girls with their dancing teacher. And they are practicing dancing. In the game room, there are six children. They are making riddles and guessing.
All of the children in the big house are very happy, because they can learn many things and have so much fun it!
评语:本文是看图作文。小作者根据所给图片,发挥了充分的想象,把静止的图片写得活灵活现,很有生气。这种利用图片让学生运用所学的语言进行表达的语言训练,有助于学生综合语言运用能力的提高。 |
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