四年级下册语文园地四习作看图（一张旧照片）作文3篇（400字、500字）

1579168675 · 发表于 2015-4-25 21:13:10

还行

1579168675 · 发表于 2015-4-25 21:55:44

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疯狂的疯狂 · 发表于 2015-5-9 08:11:49

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1140927389 · 发表于 2016-4-14 16:41:18

有370字吗？

EXO-M521 · 发表于 2016-4-19 06:36:59

第一字太少，第二中心不突出，第三跑题！自觉重写吧！

jhkkkhjjjjjjjjj · 发表于 2017-4-11 19:00:18

床上没了尔の味发表于 2012-3-5 18:38
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jhkkkhjjjjjjjjj · 发表于 2017-4-11 19:02:15

1140927389 发表于 2016-4-14 16:41
有370字吗？

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