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发表于 2020-9-20 09:16:03
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主题训练
--- 成长历程
I.主题词汇
成长经历:teenager, graduate from, allow sb. to do, ask for advice, one’s best friend,
be curious about sth.(对某事好奇), do one’s best, make efforts to do sth.
(尽力做某事), little by little
校园生活:understand, get on well with sb.(与某人相处得好), raise one’s hand,
take an active part in
业余爱好:be interested in, be fond of, enjoy doing, spend ... doing, in one’s spare
time
学习生活:take courses, put one’s heart into, pass an exam, fail an exam, cheat in the
exam, chat in the exam(在考试中作弊), subject, hand in(上交), pay
attention to, full of competition(充满竞争)
人物偶像:genius, respect, think highly of sb.(高度评价某人), look forward to
doing
学习策略:express, explain, confidence, make a survey, collect information, plan a
schedule
II. 常用句型
1.To improve the situation, I suggest ...
2.As middle school students, we ought to be responsible for ourselves.
3.It’s also important to find a way to be involved in social activities.
4.Here I have two suggestions. First ... Second ...
5.Your life today is the result of your attitudes and choices in the past. Your life tomorrow will be the result of your attitudes and choices today.
6.Sometimes your biggest weakness can become your biggest strength.
7.Some of the great success stories have followed a word of encouragement.
8.From her confidence, we know that ...
9.We should believe in ourselves.
10.Just keep on trying. The process of trying is much more valuable than the results.
11.Smile on failure and smile on life.
12.Actually, failure is like a naughty boy who plays with us on the way to our goals. On one hand, he wants to test us. On the other hand, he wants to help us become braver. The more we smile on failure, the braver we shall be.
13.Growing older and growing up. Growing up doesn’t need any talent or ability. Growing up is always finding the opportunity for change. Never give up dreaming.
14.A volunteer’s work is very great and helpful. I learn responsibility and to be patient from it. I hope more and more young people will be volunteers.
15.When I am free, I often go to the nursing home to so something good, such as reading books. washing clothes and doing some cleaning for the old.
16.Everyone is not perfect to do everything. We often get help from others in our daily life. In return to the help from others, we must help other people as often as possible.
III. 模拟试题
__________ is the most important thing in my life
a.What is the most important thing in your life? ( health, happiness, friendship, honesty...)
b.Why do you think so? (Give two reasons)
c.What is your suggestion?
要点分析:
1.在审题时,学生要注意“我生命中最重要的东西”,不是单指某一样东西或某一件事,而是通过实例来突出某一项品质(如:友谊、自信助人、诚实、感恩等)。
2.注意:提出的建议要围绕主题来写,而不能前后脱节。
写作思路:
围绕“友谊”,给出一些建议和保持友谊的秘诀:
1.Friends share happiness with us. In addition, they keep us from sadness.
2.Without friends, we feel lonely and bored. However, with them our life will be more and more coulourful.
3.In a word, friends are our most precious wealth and friendship is necessary to everyone.
4.Friendship is like a leaf on the tree. Though they are small and ordinary, without them the tree will be ugly.
5.Friendship can male our life more coulourful and meaningful.
6.Nobody can get through life without friendship.
7.I’m lucky enough to make many kinds of active friends around me.
8.Whenever I am blue, they comfort me and help me find solutions to my problems.
9.I like my friends because we can believe in each other and help each other.
10.I regard him as my best friend. We always discuss together and have many activities in our spare time.
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Friendship is the most important thing in my life
If I don’t have friendship, my world may become coulourless. So I think friendship is one of the most important things in my life. No one can live in the world alone. When we are in trouble, friends can help us overcome those difficulties in life. When we feel happy, we hope there is someone who can share our happiness.
To make friends with people, we should be frank and honest to others so that people can trust us. What’s more, a real friend never hesitates to give his or her love and care to us. Let’s try our best to treat our friends sincerely, and we will find that our life may become coulourful with so many friends around us.
1.Happiness is the most important thing in my life
Happiness is the most important to us. When we feel happy, the world feels like a better place. First, wearing a smile will make us more charming and help us to win lots of friends. A good mood always gives us hopes. Second, remember life is full of ups and downs. We can’t change the way life is, but we can do our best to be happy. Third, we should always be confident. Confident is half success. When we smile, the world smiles with us. Let’s make our world full of happiness.
2.Confidence is the most important thing in my life
There are a lot of important things in my life, such as friendship, money, family and time. But I think the most important thing is confidence. Confidence is the first step to success. It makes you not afraid of difficulties. When I was in Grade Four, I made a speech in the school hall, and all of the students listened carefully, if I didn’t have confidence, I couldn’t make that speech so fluently. Confidence makes me shine brightly. It is the most important thing to me.
3.Independence is the most important thing in my life
As we all know, independence is a symbol of growing up. I’m independent on my study and I don’t need my parents to worry about my study. In my opinion, we should learn to do something by ourselves because we can learn about responsibility and get ready for becoming an adult.
To realize this goal/achieve the aim, we should try to study by ourselves and learn to do some housework as often as possible. To sum up, we can be brave to face our future life if we learn to be independent.
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1.Growing up
Growing up is no doubt hard but unforgettable. Among all these experiences that made me grow up, the PE lesson is the most unforgettable one. I used to be poor at physical activities. When the teacher told us to jump high in the lesson, I felt afraid and shy at first. Though I fixed my eyes on the teacher’s performance and listened carefully, I still failed in my first jump. I almost wanted to give up, but the teacher encouraged me a lot. With the help of the teacher and my hard work, I succeeded at last. This experience taught me never to give up when I meet difficulties. I grew up after this unforgettable lesson. ‘’No pains, no gains.” That’s what I learned from my process of growing up.
2.How to get on well with others?
a. Getting on well with others is very important in our daily life. I can get on well with others easily because I am always kind and friendly. Besides. I have many friends as well. To achieve it, first you should talk to others with smile and never be impolite. Other people will think you are a good boy/girl. Second, you should think about others more than yourselves. If you do this, everyone would like to make friends with you. All in all, we ought to try our best to get on well with others.
b. As we all live in such a modern city, getting on well with others has become a necessary ability in our daily life. I get on well with others because of the following reasons.
Firstly, we should be helpful to others. When some people have trouble, I always give a hand to them. Then we can set up strong relationship between each other. Secondly, honesty is important to everyone. No one wants to make friends with dishonest persons, so we should never tell lies. Finally, we should trust on others’ manners and always be generous to give our best to others and expect for nothing.
I believe we’ll all get on well with others by following the above tips. Let’s spread warmth and love around us and set up strong relationship together.
c. Relationships between one and another have strong effects on our lives. So I think it is necessary to get on well with others. I’m getting on well with others because I am always friendly and helpful to others. Another reason is that I don’t get angry easily. Here are some suggestions on how to get on well with others. First, keep good mood. People would not like to be friends with a person who has bad temper. Second, be willing to help others. We give them a hand when others are in trouble. This can prove that we are a true friend worth getting along with. Third, compliments are welcomed. Praise our friends more often. In that way, they will certainly like you.
To sum up, getting on well with others can be easy, but it requires some effort. Let’s try our best to get on well with others.
3.Where there is a will, there is a way
When I was only 5 years old, my parents often told me that where there is a will, there is a way. At that time, I couldn’t understand it very well. But now I think it is very important. For example, I passed the PE test successfully though I was not very good at sports. I could do it because I believed in myself and took an active part in it. Here I have two suggestions. First, when you meet some serious problems, you can tell yourself that no one can achieve their goal without effort. Second, you should work harder and harder. I believe that everyone can succeed in their own field if they believe in themselves.
4.After I failed….
Nobody can be successful without failure. Neither can I. As a Grade Nine student. The PE exam is very important. But when we first practiced running in class, my score really made me disappointed. Then, I told myself that I must try my best to improve my score. To make my dream come true, I first gave myself a plan of doing exercise. Then, I always tried my best to do it. Finally, during the final exam, I got an unbelievable score. It made me feel really excited. From then on, I know that where there is a will, there is a way.
5.An interesting lesson
Last week I had an interesting English lesson and I like it very much. At the beginning of the class, the teacher taught us a text. It was a detective story. All of us were very curious about the story. After we learned the whole text, the teacher asked us to have a role play. Luckily, I was asked to be the clever detective. At first, I felt so nervous that I couldn’t remember my words. But the teacher and my group members encouraged me a lot. Then I felt confident in myself and began to enjoy the play. Although I still made some mistakes in my performance, I felt very happy because English was not so difficult or boring. Learning English can be an interesting game, if we can find interest in it, we will enjoy it.
6.My example of learning by failure
When I was in Grade Eight, I always played computer games. It attracted me so much that I had no time to review my lessons. When the final exam was on, I had almost no ability to finish the whole test paper. I knew I failed again and felt very sad. With the help of my teachers and my parents, I realized how foolish I was to spend so much time playing the computer games. From the beginning of Grade Nine, I Knew I had no time to lose. I began to study harder than before and make great progress in some subjects. I still remember an English saying “No pains, no gains.”
Although I have made great progress, I know that is not enough. I will try my best to improve some subjects which I’m still not good at. I believe my ability in dealing with some difficulties. I will enter the high school I like best.
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