作文：HOWILEARNENGLISH(初三作文)

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作文 ：HOW I LEARN ENGLISH (初三作文)
HOW I LEARN ENGLISH

When I started learning English,I decided to read lots of English articles to improve my English.this may be very boring,but really effective.and after I read the whole article book,I found that my English make a great progress,I got the best grade in the class.I continuedmy article reading,and found more and more difficult articles to read,last year I got the first prize in the National English Proficiency Competition for Secondary Schools Students.But I found a shortcoming of reading article——reading can’t improve my listening,so I am going to practice my listening by listening to tapes.

本文优点： 这篇作文最大的亮点是写作思路清晰。开篇点题，介绍自己学习英语的方法。文中使用了when, but,after 等过渡词语，使文章更加有条理，更有逻辑性。另外，文章中用了make progress, more and more difficult, be going to, by doing sth. 等短语，丰富了文章的结构。

美中不足： 注意避免写出汉语式的英语像my English make a great progress .