小同学优秀英语小作文30篇（和点评）

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My Favourite stamp
I have a lot of stamps and my favourite stamp is an animal stamp.
Look, there is a chick in this stamp. The chick has a red cockscomb, two bright eyes, a long neck and a short tail. Its feathers are yellow and brown. This stamp is very beautiful.
I like this stamp very much.
Miss Wang点评台集邮不只可以增加我们的见识，同时也可以陶冶我们的情操。本文的小作者就是一个集邮喜好者，看小作者所描述的小鸡邮票多么可爱呀！感兴趣的小朋友可以试着收集邮票啊！Miss Wang要奖给姚晗小朋友一个"Very Good!",继续加油啊！
My Good Friend
Hello! My name is Maggie. I have a good friend. Her Chinese name is Wang Qi. Her English name is Mary. She likes fruit very much. Her favourite color is blue.
She is very beautiful. She has small eyes and wears a pair of glasses. She has two small ears, a small nose and a lovely mouse. She is very tall. She likes swimming and playing football. She is a good student.
We are in the same school and the same class. But we are not in the same row.
I like her very much. We always play together.

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My Winter Holiday
This winter holiday, I went to Kunming with my family. Kunming is a very beautiful city, I think. The sky is blue and the air is clean. You can see many kinds of nice flowers everywhere. The weather there is great. It's never too hot or too cold all the year round, so people always call it "Spring City".
Kunming is surrounded(围绕) by beautiful scenery. And one of the most famous views is "The Stone Forest". It is really scenic(自然风景的).
We just stayed in Kunming for six days, but I felt very happy, and I like Kunming very much.
　　点评中心：寒假虽然已经过去一个多月了，但是在这个假期所发生的事大家是否还都铭记在心呢？作者就把她的这份心情用笔记录了下来。小作者通过在寒假期间去美丽的春城--昆明游玩，抒发了对美好自然风光的热爱。文章生动、形象，用词准确。
Myself
Look at this photo. A little boy is climbing a tree. Who is the boy? Guess, please! Yes, it's me. My name is Zhu Shaoyu. I'm ten years old. I'm very naughty and smart. I have big eyes and short black hair. I'm thin and tall.
　　I'm a student. I'm in Xia Zhuang Primary School, Qing Zhou City. I'm in Class One, Grade Five.
　　My favourite subject is English. I study English very hard. I think nothing is difficult, if I put my heart into it. Now I can speak English well. I obtained the First Award in the 2003 National English Competition for Primary School Students. I will study harder in future.
　　My favourite master of ceremonies is Li Yong, because he is very funny.
　　My favourite newspaper is English Coaching Paper, because it gives me a lot of knowledge. It makes me learn English better.
　　My favourite food is hamburger, because it is very delicious. I like its taste.
　　Do you like me? Would you like to make friends with me?
　　点评台：几乎每个人都很了解自身，所以要是介绍自身，可写的内容很多。但小作者并没有平均分配笔墨，而是重点描写了自身的几个"最喜欢"。整篇文章条理清楚、重点突出、语言流畅、用词准确，可以说写得很胜利。希望同学们向朱劭宇同学学习，写出一篇篇精彩的文章与大家一起分享。文章级别：A。

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My School
Hello, friends! Welcome to my school. My school is beautiful and very big.
There are many rooms in the school building. My classroom is on the sixth floor. There are sixty-nine students in my class. You can see many desks, chairs, a blackboard, three fans, two windows, four lights and a teacher's desk. My seat is near the door. The computer room is on the third floor. There are many computers in it. I like playing computer games very much!The canteen(食堂) is on the first floor. We have lunch there.
Look! This is the playground. We often play games on it. There are many flowers in the garden, some are red, some are yellow...
I have a good time every day in my school. I like my school very much.
　　点评台：文章向大家描述了他学校的教室，食堂，微机室以和操场，其中重点描写了自身的班级，主次分明，层次清晰，正确地运用了There be句型和一般现在时时态，是一篇很胜利的文章，文章级别：A。
My Uncle
My uncle is a professor. His name is Chen Hao. He teaches Chinese in a university. He is tall and thin. He wears a pair of glasses. He likes reading. He has a big study at home. It's very bright. There are many books in his study. He often reads and writes in his study. He is kind to his students, so his students like him very much. He is very kind to me, too. He often sends me books. I like him, too.
点评中心：本篇小文章描写的是小作者的叔叔，首先从她叔叔的职业、外貌开始描写，接着又描写了她叔叔的喜好--读书与写作。表达了小作者对其叔叔的崇敬与敬仰之情。文章条理清晰，用词准确，无语法错误，是一篇较优秀的文章。

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My Hometown
My hometown-Kaiping is a very beautiful city. It is located(座落) in the southwest(西南) part of Guangdong Province(省). My hometown is famous for Diaolous. Ruishi Tower is one of the Diaolous (Please look at the picture.). It was built in 1923. The top of the tower looks like the Italy stronghold(堡垒). It is tall and magnificent (雄伟的). People praise(赞扬) it for "the No. 1 Tower" of Kaiping.
　　I like my hometown.
　　点评台：小作者的My Hometown主要描写了家乡著名的碉楼，其中重点向大家介绍了"开平第一楼"--瑞石楼，抒发了自身对家乡的热爱之情。整篇文章语句连贯，没有语法错误。文章中出现了一些生词，可见小作者是用心查字典了，希望小作者继续发扬这个好习惯，并写出更多的好文章与大家分享。文章级别：A。
Spring
I like spring because spring is beautiful. Many flowers are very lovely. Some grass and trees turn green.
Look! A little girl is flying a kite with her father. She likes to fly kites. Her father is smiling. It's very warm today. So there're a lot of birds flying in the sky. They're playing together. They look very happy. A breeze is blowing over the land. The sunlight is soft. A clear river is flowing.
How beautiful the spring is!
点评台:这篇文章篇幅虽短却写出了春天的生机与活力.特别是小作者着重描写了春天里的某一天,使整篇文章的中心更加明确.用词准确、生动,没有语法错误也是这篇文章的另一优点.文章级别:A.

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My Good Friend
I have a good friend. Her name is Zhang Hong. She is 9 years old. She is a pretty girl. She has long hair and big beautiful eyes. They look like stars.
Her favourite colour is pink. Her favourite animals are cats and rabbits. She likes to play badminton very much. Her favourite class is English. She studies very hard. She is a good student.
I love her very much. I will learn from her.
本文围绕My Good Friend这一主题，运用所学英语知识，针对好朋友的外貌、喜好进行介绍，为读者展示了一个活泼、可爱的小女孩形象。Miss Wang要奖给孟婷婷同学一个"Very Good！"。同时，孟婷婷同学也要继续努力练习英文写作呀！
My Grandfather's Garden
My grandfather has a small garden. There are many flowers in it. I think all the flowers are beautiful. My grandfather gets up early every mor-ning. First, he goes to his garden to have a look at the flowers. Then, he waters them. When he waters the flowers, he feels very happy. My sister and I like the garden very much. We often play in it. Sometimes we water the flowers and catch worms for them.
One day, my brother picked a flower. My grandfather was very angry and sad. He said to my brother, "My child, don't pick the flowers. That's not a good deed(行为). " My brother felt very sorry for that. And we all didn't pick flowers from then on.
The flowers in my grandfather's garden are more and more beautiful now. I like my grandfather's garden.
点评台：向大家描写了爷爷的花园，虽没有太多华丽的词语，但能使读者感受到花园的美丽和花儿的芳香。通过描写爷爷对花园的精心料理以和对弟弟的教育，能看出本篇文章不只仅是写爷爷的花园，也从字里行间中看出了小作者对爷爷的敬佩之情。文章条理清楚、意思连贯，没有语法错误，是一篇很胜利的文章，希望再接再励！文章级别：A。

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My Favourite stamp
I have a lot of stamps and my favourite stamp is an animal stamp.
Look, there is a chick in this stamp. The chick has a red cockscomb, two bright eyes, a long neck and a short tail. Its feathers are yellow and brown. This stamp is very beautiful.
I like this stamp very much.
Miss Wang点评台集邮不只可以增加我们的见识，同时也可以陶冶我们的情操。本文的小作者就是一个集邮喜好者，看小作者所描述的小鸡邮票多么可爱呀！感兴趣的小朋友可以试着收集邮票啊！Miss Wang要奖给姚晗小朋友一个"Very Good!",继续加油啊！
My Good Friend
Hello! My name is Maggie. I have a good friend. Her Chinese name is Wang Qi. Her English name is Mary. She likes fruit very much. Her favourite color is blue.
She is very beautiful. She has small eyes and wears a pair of glasses. She has two small ears, a small nose and a lovely mouse. She is very tall. She likes swimming and playing football. She is a good student.
We are in the same school and the same class. But we are not in the same row.
I like her very much. We always play together.
讲评中心：文章比较详尽、完整地描述了她的好朋友的特征，包括了好朋友的外貌、喜好等，文章词语使用准确、语法正确、主题突出，“Good!”，不要骄傲，继续努力啊！

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My Lovely Home
I live in a small village named Fengyi. I live in an old building. It was built in 1999. It has three floors. On the first floor, there is a big living room, a kitchen and a bathroom. On the second floor, there are altogether three bedrooms. One for my grandma, one for my parents, another for me. On the third floor, there is an attic. It's my study, it's quiet. I like to study there. When I am tired, I can rest in the balcony. There is some beautiful old furniture, it's tidy. My parents clean it every day. I can also do some housework.
My friends, do you love my home?
　　点评中心：My Lovely Home开篇直接切入本文主题，首先从房子的结构开始介绍，句子简洁、通顺，接着又重点描述了与自身有关的几个房间，语言生动、贴切，最后又抒发了自身对家的热爱。
My Favourite Sport
My favourite sport is swimming.
I often swim in the pool. I swim twice a week. When I am swimming in the pool, I am very happy. I look like a lovely fish in the pond. I enjoy swimming, because swimming can make me strong and healthy. It can also bring me a lot of happiness. Of course, I like watching this sport. I hope I will become a swimmer in the future.
点评中心:这篇小文章语言精炼、准确,短短几句便勾画出了一幅生动、活泼的画面。