2023年中考英语冲刺复习知识点：作文分析

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英语课代表分发试卷的时候发现了一份没有署名的试卷，成绩为满分。请你帮助课代表分析它会是谁的。

要求：1.设想当时的情景，适当扩展细节；

2. 书写工整，100词左右。

参考词汇：top student优等生；handwriting笔迹；full marks满分

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we had an exam yesterday and now the papers are being handed out. There’s a paper without a name on it and that student got full marks.

Whom can it belong to? It can’t be a boy’s, because none of them in class can be so good and tidy. The paper must belong to a girl because its handwriting is very tidy. There are only three girls who are good at handwriting — Rose, Mary and Lucy. It might belong to Rose, but I’m not sure because she is not so good at English. It can’t be Mary’s. Although she is a top student in English, she has already had hers in hand. So it must belong to Lucy. Today she is ill at home and she does well in English, too. Well, it must belong to her.

假如你是郭佳，你的美国笔友Linda给你写了一封信，说她想给自己的汉语老师送一份礼物来表达自己的感激之情，但是她不知道中国的送礼习俗，所以请你给她一些建议。请根据下面的提示，用英语写一封回信给她。

提示：1.要根据个人喜好选择礼物；

2. 礼物的包装不要使用白色或者黑色包装纸（wrapping paper）；

3. 不要送钟、鞋或者梨。

要求：1.语意通顺，条理清楚；

2. 80词左右。（信的格式和开头已给出，不计入总词数）

【优秀满分范文】

Dear Linda,

I am glad to give you advice on the customs of giving gifts in my country.

Firstly, I think you need to find out what your Chinese teacher likes. Choosing the gift that your teacher is interested in is a good idea. Secondly, don’t pack the gift with black or white wrapping paper, because black and white aren’t considered to be lucky colors. Thirdly, don’t buy your teacher a clock, a pair of shoes, or some pears because these have bad meanings in Chinese when giving a gift.

I hope my advice can help you.

Yours,

Guo Jia

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刚到中国来学习不久的John应汉语老师的邀请去他家里做客，因此John 向Bob请教相关礼仪。假设你是Bob,请你给John回一封电子邮件，告诉他一些注意事项。80词左右，开头已给出（不计入总词数）。

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Dear John,

I know that you will visit your Chinese teacher’s home. If you do the following, I don’t think you will feel uncomfortable.

First, you should arrive a little earlier. Being late is impolite. Second, it’s also good to bring a gift such as some flowers or fruit. Third, you will probably use chopsticks to have dinner. Remember not to stick your chopsticks into your food. You’d better say that the food is delicious while you are eating. Finally, after dinner, showing thanks is also necessary. And you are not supposed to stay long after dinner.

Good luck!

Yours,

Bob

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假设上周六晚上，你们全家在一家饭店就餐。请你根据以下要点提示，用英语写一篇短文，描述事情发生的经过，并适当加以评论。

要点提示：

1. 邻桌年轻人大声说话、吸烟。

2. 你请他们不要那样做。

3. 他们不听，反而嘲笑你。

4. 你认为：①他们在公共场所那样做是不对的。

②年轻人是祖国的未来，应该......

参考词汇：嘲笑laugh at

要求：

1. 词数80左右，短文开头已给出（不计入总词数）。

2. 要点齐全，行为连贯，可适当发挥。

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Last Saturday evening, all my family had dinner in a resturant.

We enjoyed ourselves while we were at table. However, some teenagers sitting beside our table began to talk and laugh loudly. What’s worse, they began to smoke in the restaurant, which made us angry. After a while, I stood up and advised them to stop smoking and behave themselves. To my surprise, they didn’t follow my suggestions. Instead, they laughed at me, saying that I was too young and too naive.

In my opinion, it’s wrong to do that in public. The future of our courtry lies in teenagers, who should not only obey the rules in public but also make contributions to the society.