Last Saturday, our class went to the zoo. We left school at 8 o’clock. It took us half an hour’s walk to get there.
First we went to see tigers because most of us liked tigers very much. We stayed at the tiger house for about half an hour. Not long after, Wang Tao wanted to see birds, so we went to the bird house. Then we went with our teacher to see monkeys. Soon it was time for lunch. We had our lunch under a big tree.
After lunch, we went here and there, in twos and threes, to see lions, deer, rabbits and other animals. When we were ready to leave, our teacher said that we would come again after the mid - term exam.
It sat there, smiled and looked at me. I was very thankful to my dog.
Today we really had fun.
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May 18, 2008 Sunday Fine
Today my father and I went to watch a football match with my pet dog. My dog is lovely, white and black. It took us half an hour to drive a car to the football field. We had a good time watching the match.
After the match, we went out to look for our car. There were lots of cars everywhere. We came to a red car. My father thought it was ours. But my dog jumped into another one. I told it to come to my car, it stayed in the car without moving. Then we were surprised my father couldn’t open the gate of the car. He looked at the car carefully and found it didn’t belong to us. The dog stayed in the right car. It sat there, smiled and looked at us. I was very thankful to my dog.
Today we really had fun.