This Morning
This morning is cool.I am going to play basketball.After play basketball,I feel tired,but I very happy.Because basketball is my favourite sport.My body is strong.I hope you like basketball too.I play computer games now.
点评:该篇作文条理清晰,可贵之处是能够运用已学知识来完成叙述。例如:I am going to play basketball.此处用到了五年级第四单元正在进行时的语法知识。此外整篇作文中出现了如tired,happy等形容词,运用恰当合理,是篇较佳的小学生英语作文。 |