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I have a happy family. In my family there are four people. They are my father, my mother, my brother and I. My father is a businessman. My mother is a farmer. My brother and I are students. I’m thirteen years old. I’m in Class One, Grade Six. My brother is in Class Two, Grade Four. We help each other and we love each other.
Mr. Guo点评:小作者感情真挚,语言简洁流畅,为读者们展现出一幅幸福美满的画面。 |
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