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Welcome to my home! My home is not big. But it is very nice and clean. There is a living room, two bathrooms, a kitchen and two bedrooms in it.
The big bedroom is for my parents. You can see a TV, a window, a bed, a door, a dressing table in it. You can see a window, a door, a desk, a chair, a bed and a computer in my bedroom. You can see a TV, a sofa, a table, a desk and five chairs in the living room.
I like my home and my family!
点评:作者很详细地介绍自己的家,句子通顺,用词得当。最后I like my home and my family! 点出作者的意图。 |
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