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The way to celebrate birthday in China

There are many ways to celebrate birthday all over the world.As a Chinese student , I will introduce the way in China to you.

In China , we often have a birthday party at home or in a restaurant to have the meal together, and we don't forget to eat the birthday cake after the meal .Sometimes we have some games during the party or dancing or singing .Or we often buy a special gift as a birthday present . we also can make a birthday card and make it beautiful . I think this is a good way , because it is full of best wishes from heart.

There are three ways on usual we celebrate birthday . I hope it can give you a help.

本文优点： 文章写出了在中国庆祝生日的方式，中心突出，语句较连贯，写的不错。

美中不足： 个别标点符号使用不太准确，句首第一个字母要大些，个别句子不太通顺，注意前后句的照应。