标题: 初中英语作文Ilovemyschool评析 [打印本页] 作者: admin 时间: 2010-11-24 10:53 标题: 初中英语作文I love my school评析 I love my school
My school is very big with several tall buildings.there are about 800 students in it .We have a big playground with a lot trees around it.In summer ,there are all kinds of flowers everywhere. We have a lot of fun at school. During the breaks,we play games and do sports,such as playing basketball, football and table tennis. All of us students can study hard, obey the school rules ,take care of the school environment. There are many interesting activities for us to take part in. The teachers in the school are kind to us just like our parents.In my heart, the school is like a big family. I like my school and feel proud of it.
1.文章书写形式不规范，希望注意。
2.“there are …”句首字母要大写。应改为.“There are …”.
3.My school is very big with several tall buildings.“with”用得恰到好处。
4.There are many interesting activities for us to take part in. 运用了不定式作后置定语，很好。
5.In my heart, the school is like a big family. 比喻恰当。