It is a nice day. Ourclass will have a field trip today. The classmates are very excited. Look! Herewe are. There’re a lot of activities to do. Amy iswatching insects. Peter is collecting leaves. They want to write a report.Mandy is catching butterflies in the woods. Tim and Bob are playing chess. Someof the classmates are having a picnic. There is a lot of delicious food to eat.Oh, who’s that over there? It’sMiss White. What is she doing? She is taking photos. We had a very good time. I’ll never forget this field trip.
It is sunny today .Mymother, my father and I are going to the park. We like the park very much. Itis very big and beautiful .There are many trees and flowers in it. Many peoplelike to go there. Look! An old man is sitting on the chair. He is reading abook carefully. Two boys are jumping on the ground. Their mothers are talkingwith each other. Two birds are flying in the sky. The ducks are swimming in theriver. They are very happy. What is the cat doing? Oh, it is running after a mouse.It’s a poor mouse.
There are five people inmy family. They are my grandma, grandpa, dad, mom and I. Look! Grandma iswatching TV. Grandpa is reading a book. Dad is writing an e-mail. Mom iscooking dinner. I am doing my homework. I love my family!
My village is verybeautiful. There are many houses in the village. Near the village, there is aforest. A small river is in front of the village. The water in it is veryclean. We can see some fish in the river. Near the river, you can see amountain. Some flowers and grass are on the mountain. I like my village.Welcome to my village!
Every year, when it’s birthday, my parents hold a party for me. They invite my friend tocome to my house to celebrate my birthday. I can get many beautiful gifts everyyear. In my party, we can do many things:
注意：由于这篇短文很有局限性，所表达的大体上都基本相同，所以在书写的时候要注意结合自己的实际活动与真情实感去写。另外注意一些短语和单词的书写不要发生错误：eg.“吹蜡烛”要写成“blow out the candles”而不能写成“blow candles”。
6、My Seasons
We have four seasons in ayear. I can do many interesting things in each season. In spring, the weatheris cool and wind, I can fly kites when it’s wind. And Ican go hiking with my family when it’s sunny and cool.I like hiking. Summer is hot in the north of China, but it’s not long time. I often go swimming. It can make me healthy andstrong. I can also wear my beautiful dresses. Fall is a season with harvest.And I can eat delicious fruits in this season. I can watch the leaves fall.Winter comes, it’s often snowy in winter in myhometown. When it snows, everything is white. We can play with snow and make asnowman, skate and ski. And winter is my favourite season, because of theSpring Festival. I love seasons. I love the nature.
This is the kitchen of myfamily. It’s big and nice. Look! My mother is cookingin it. This is a microwave and that is a stove. There is a big table here.There are many things on it. What are these? They look yummy! Oh, they’re strawberries. And what are those? They are grapes.
I am a girl. My name isLi Ling. I’m in Class Three, Grade Five. I’m helpful at home. I can water the flowers, empty the trash andsweep the floor. After meals, I can help my mother do the dishes. On Sunday, Ican wash the clothes. What about you? Are you helpful, too?
Do you know what this is?Guess! Its colour is yellow. It’s long and thin. Itlooks like a small boat and crescent. Oh, it is a banana. Do you know what thatis? Guess again! Its colour is orange. It’s round. It lookslike a small ball and a small lantern. Oh, it is an orange. I like then a lot.I like ice-creams. I like to chew gum. Chocolates and candies are yummy. I likethem very much.
How about you? What’s your favourite food?
【要领点评】
My Favourite Food 是一篇很成功的文章，小作者并不是简单地列举出自己最喜欢的每一种食物，而是有详有略地进行介绍。整篇文章用词准确、语言流畅、没有语法错误。另外，文章中出现了一些生词，可见小作者是用心查字典了。
寒假很快就要到了，请你为你的寒假写一个计划。快点把你的计划写出来吧!
10、My Winter Holiday
It’s January. My winter holiday is coming. I am going to go toThailand. Iwill go there by plane. I like the food inThailand. In the winter holiday, Iam going to play basketball. I am going to paint pictures, too. I will help mymother do some housework. I will be very happy in my winter holiday.